72. 1 August SyFying
Siphoning the ethereal from under lyrical verses,the fabulous springs forward, spewing imaginationon the walls and ceiling like Pollack. How does itdecide where to splat and when to dab? I'm noart...
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Hi P- I just posted in the Waters and since there isn't much action over there I decided to do a few crits on the Beach. In college I did a few experiments with Pollack and abstract expressionism, not...
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I like it! Esp: pretending I'm Sting in a bad filming of Dune. Brighter and brighter against the endlessly bland and untraceable script. Yes, interesting comparison of one art form to another....
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Hello to all -- so glad you're here, and Dale, please join us in a set of 7 if you can. It feels good to be back on the Beach. Mignon -- this poem holds up very well throughout, imo. Like the pop...
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I love the flow here, M. I wish poems like this popped into my head " Brighter and brighter against the endlessly bland and untraceable script."
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Yes, Mignon, you've done a good job comparing art forms. When to dab and when to splat, when to hold back and when to go flat out. I liked what Dale said as well.
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